Monday Morning

On Monday Mornings it is hard to wake up but on Sundays you don’t have to.
When my mum said wake up get ready four school i went back to sleep then
I was late four school but when i got to school i was not late.In the morning my mum said it is time to wake up get ready four school.
When i waked up I was tied and wanted to go back to sleep but had to go to school.

Wake up wake up my mum said, it is time four school when I woke up I was half a sleep.
I got greased four school then I had my beak fast I got my bag then I went of to school when I was walking down the road a bird pooped on my hand.


I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience.
Here are 3 versions. Which Monday Morning introduction do you like best and why?