In the weekend I went to my sister’s new house on Maybury Street. It is next to my friend's house.
When I went to my sister’s new house she had two bedrooms and it was big.
She has a big bathroom and one toilet and a big sitting room.
The back yard it is small and on the side but it is big enough to play rugby and soccer.
In the front it is a little bigger and I like it in the front because it is better.
In the room it has one big closet and it is good to play hide and seek.
When you go into it and turn off the light it is really black and hard to see.
When I went to my sister’s new house she had two bedrooms and it was big.
She has a big bathroom and one toilet and a big sitting room.
The back yard it is small and on the side but it is big enough to play rugby and soccer.
In the front it is a little bigger and I like it in the front because it is better.
In the room it has one big closet and it is good to play hide and seek.
When you go into it and turn off the light it is really black and hard to see.
I really like the way you are trying to write about one idea in each sentence Evan.
ReplyDeleteYour sister's house sounds great.